Six Attributes – Picture it and Write

Picture It and Write is a weekly writing challenge, posted every Sunday by Eliabeth, the author of Emiliablog. The challenge is to write a piece of fiction or a poem in response to the photo prompt supplied by the host. Here is this week’s photo . . . steampunk-pens and this is my story . . .

‘Choose wisely, my son. The implement you select will show little remorse should it sense resistance to its flow.’

I nod as my father smiles, gesturing to each pen as he expounds. ‘The first will show you as an honest man, straight paths laid out before you: a man who cuts no corners to the truth. Think on it … is that really you?’

I frown at the implied dishonesty, but my father’s finger moves to the right. ‘This pen has a pleasing design: straight threads leading to a central core. The spider-web design will show you to be a man of ambition: blinkered to all else that life has to offer until he reaches his goal. Could that be you?’

I touch the badge on my jacket, identifying me as Sergeant Matthews of HRH Queen Victoria’s Police Force. Did my ambition to be Chief Inspector blind me to other aspects of life?

Father’s finger hovers over the third pen from the left. ‘Here we see shapes of varying size and shape. This pen will reveal the writer to be a thoughtful man, willing to consider a variety of issues placed before him. Whereas the fourth pen…

… will show the grid-iron nature of a man unwilling to adapt to outside influences, too fixed in his comfortable existence to share his life with others.’

I wonder … is that what I want, a comfortable yet solitary life? I picture the lonely years ahead – and baulk at the scene.

‘As to the fifth pen,’ my father continues, ‘its design resembles the brickwork of a house. The tilted effect suggests some creativity in the architect, a man who will experiment a little and explore his own strengths.’

I nod again, considering such attributes within myself.

‘Now to the last implement in my collection … Note how the irregular shapes fit perfectly together, as would a jigsaw puzzle. The user of this pen will be shown to be a complex man, capable of multiple emotions, ambitions and desires; a man able to deal with any obstacle placed in his way.’

I reach for the sixth pen to my father’s nod of approval. ‘I confess to having a little of all of the qualities you describe, Father, but none to the exclusion of all others. I believe this pen would suit me admirably. I shall write to Gwendolyn immediately, assuring her that once we are wed our life together will be one of honesty, exploration and love. We will face all obstacles together.’

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About milliethom

I am a reader and writer of historical fiction with a keen interest in the Earth's history and all it involves, both physically and socially. I like nothing better than to be outdoors, especially in faraway places, and baking is something I do when my eyes need respite from my computer screen.
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16 Responses to Six Attributes – Picture it and Write

  1. draliman says:

    I like the idea behind this, with each pen portraying a different attribute as he writes the letter. Since he’s writing to his soon-to-be wife, pen number one – rigid honesty – is definitely out heh heh 🙂

  2. luckyjc007 says:

    Wonderful description of all the pens and Gwendolyn is a very lucky woman!

  3. Wow! I absolutely love this! It reminded me of Aesops Fables, and the lessons they teach. It’s just wonderful! ❤ ❤

    • milliethom says:

      Thank you so much for that Wow comment! ❤ I'm glad it appealed to you because I'd been hooked on the idea for a day or two. It was the only thing I really wanted to write for that prompt. ❤

      • It was a great idea. I love reading the fables with the morals and lessons. William J Bennett compiled a book with all those stories, and poems that taught lessons. I have loved reading them to my boys. 🙂

      • milliethom says:

        Yes, we had lots of them, too, when our six were young. They’ve all taken them away with them now! My husband wouldn’t part with his boyhood faviourite “Just So Stories” by Rudyard Kipling, though!

  4. Norma says:

    I liked the symbolism attached with different pens. It reminded me of my childhood days when my parents used to narrate stories or share experiences to show the moral learnt from them. A story well told, Millie. 🙂

    • milliethom says:

      Thank you for that lovely comment, Norma. I wasn’t sure my idea for this one would work, but the more I looked at the patterns on the pens, the more the idea developed. 🙂

  5. Ineke says:

    This is a different and special take on the pens! Very interesting “facts”that go with each pen and then also the son thinking about himself. The last one is the best one because it gives soft unselfish strings attached to it! Love it!

  6. The idea behind the pens was wonderful, but “assuring her that once we are wed our life together will be one of honesty, exploration and love. We will face all obstacles together.’ was everything 😉 This story was truly special and sweet ❤ Good job Millie! 😉

  7. talesbytink says:

    That is very sweet. You have the knack of bringing the unexpected in.

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